Open your palms to the twilight sky,
Breathe where the stars in silence lie.
Let the wind whisper through your soul,
Where stardust dreams and planets roll.
The universe hums a sacred tune,
From newborn suns to silver moon.
It sings in light, it flows in rain,
It heals the heart, it softens pain.
Draw from the deep, the ancient fire,
The pulse that stirs your deep desire.
Let comets blaze behind your eyes,
And feel your spirit start to rise.
Mountains echo your quiet plea,
Rivers reflect your energy.
The cosmos knows, the cosmos gives,
Within its breath, your spirit lives.
So stand with grace beneath the stars,
Let go of fear, forget your scars.
Receive the strength, the boundless force—
The universe walks with your course.
Thank-you for reading.
Much love and Light,
Brenda Marie Fluharty
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Amazing poem Brenda 🌷🤝 This poem is a breathtaking ode to the interconnectedness of the human spirit and the cosmos. The imagery is luminous—stardust, comets, and whispering winds evoke a sense of vast, celestial wonder. The rhythm flows like a cosmic hymn, guiding the reader through introspection and empowerment.
What stands out most is the seamless blend of the ethereal and the personal—the universe isn’t just an external force but a living presence that “walks with your course.” The invitation to “let go of fear” and embrace the “boundless force” feels both intimate and universal, as if the poem itself is a conduit for starlight and strength.
A truly transcendent piece—one that lingers like the hum of the cosmos long after reading. ✨