13 Days of Samhain (Volume V) Halloween Writing Prompt Challenge Day #5 Once Bitten Entry

13 Days of Samhain (Volume V) Halloween Writing Prompt Challenge Day #5 Once Bitten

Once Bitten, Twice Shy

In the quiet town of Elmsworth, a chill had settled in the air as October rolled in. Halloween decorations sprang up in yards, but something darker lingered beneath the surface, whispering to those who dared to listen.

Maggie, a college freshman, was drawn to the old Hartman estate on the edge of town. Rumor had it that the previous owner, a reclusive artist, vanished mysteriously decades ago. Her friends dared her to spend a night there, convinced that the place was haunted. Thrill-seeking and curious, Maggie accepted the challenge, eager to prove her bravery.

As dusk fell, she approached the crumbling mansion. Its windows were like dark eyes, watching her every move. She felt a strange pull, an invitation that tingled at the back of her mind. With a flashlight in hand, she pushed the creaky door open and stepped inside. Dust motes danced in the beam of light as she took in the faded portraits on the walls, the expressions of the long-dead gazing down at her.

Maggie explored, her heart pounding with both fear and excitement. The air was thick with a sense of loss, a tangible sadness that seemed to seep from the walls. In the center of the main room stood an easel, still holding the unfinished canvas of a young woman, her features hauntingly familiar.

As Maggie stepped closer, a cold breeze swept through the room, extinguishing her flashlight. Panic surged, but before she could flee, she heard a whisper. “Help me…” The voice was soft, laced with desperation. She turned, and there, in the shadows, stood a figure cloaked in darkness.

“Who are you?” she asked, her voice trembling.

“I am Elara,” the figure replied, stepping into the moonlight. She was beautiful, but there was something unsettling in her gaze. “I need your help to be free.”

Maggie felt an inexplicable connection to Elara, as if they shared a secret bond. “What do you want me to do?”

“Finish my painting,” Elara said, her voice a melodic echo of longing. “Only then will I be released.”

Compelled, Maggie nodded. She found herself drawn to the easel, her fingers itching to paint. As she worked, Elara watched, her presence a swirling energy around the room. The colors came to life under Maggie’s brush, and with each stroke, she felt a warmth growing within her—a spark of life that seemed to reach for Elara.

But with the warmth came a creeping chill. Night fell deeper, shadows stretching like fingers across the floor. Strange visions flickered at the edge of Maggie’s consciousness—flashes of pain, of a betrayal that tore Elara from the world. Each image was more intense than the last, and Maggie stumbled, grasping the easel for support.

“Stop!” she cried out. “What happened to you?”

Elara’s expression darkened. “He took everything from me—my life, my love. But I will not be forgotten. You can help me reclaim what was lost.”

Maggie hesitated, torn between the promise of finishing the painting and the dread settling in her gut. She looked into Elara’s eyes and saw a hunger there, a thirst that threatened to consume her.

With a sudden rush, Elara stepped closer, her hand reaching out. “You are special, Maggie. I can feel it. We can be together. Just a taste…”

Before she knew it, Elara’s icy fingers brushed against Maggie’s wrist, and a shock of pain shot through her. It felt like a bite, sharp and real, but followed by a flood of warmth. Maggie gasped, the world around her blurring. She could feel Elara’s essence weaving into her, a twisted connection forming between them.

In a moment of clarity, Maggie pulled away, stumbling back. “No! I won’t be your vessel!”

But it was too late. The painting shimmered with life, the colors swirling as if alive. Elara’s face twisted in anger, then melted into a sorrowful smile. “You have chosen. We are bound now.”

Maggie’s heart raced as the shadows of the room began to swirl around her. The walls echoed with laughter, but it was a cruel, hollow sound. The realization dawned on her: Elara was not just a spirit; she was a parasite, and Maggie had fed her.

As the night wore on, the painting transformed into a mirror, reflecting Maggie’s own terrified face. She felt the life draining from her, her essence intertwining with Elara’s. She was trapped, forever bound to the house, an echo of the girl who had dared to finish a painting.

Outside, the townsfolk prepared for Halloween, unaware that the old Hartman estate had gained a new resident. Every year, on the night of the festival, the mansion would whisper a warning to those who listened: “Once bitten, twice shy. Beware what calls to you from the shadows.”

Thank-you for reading.

Much Love and Light,

Brenda Marie


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