Poem: Sun

Image by Denis Doukhan from Pixabay

The sun arrives without a sound,
Spilling gold across the ground.
It paints the rooftops, warms the trees,
And stirs the sleeping summer breeze.

The windows bloom with amber light,
Chasing shadows from the night.
Each blade of grass begins to gleam,
As morning rises like a dream.

Above the fields, the bright sky sings,
Awakening the quiet wings
Of sparrows tracing arcs of air
Through glowing clouds so light and fair.

And in that warmth the whole world seems
To soften gently at the seams—
For every heart, beneath its shine,
Feels briefly hopeful, bright, divine.

Thank-you for reading

Brenda Marie


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5 thoughts on “Poem: Sun

  1. What a beautiful, luminous poem, Brenda! Your imagery is stunning—I can almost feel the warmth of the sun spilling across the ground and see the windows blooming with amber light. The way you weave together nature’s quiet details with that gentle sense of hope is truly moving. “Morning rises like a dream” and “soften gently at the seams” are especially lovely lines. Thank you for sharing such a bright, heartfelt piece—it left me feeling hopeful and divine, just as you wrote.

    1. Thank you so much for your beautiful and thoughtful words. Your comment truly touched my heart. I’m deeply grateful that the imagery and emotion of the poem resonated with you so strongly. It means so much to know those lines stayed with you and that the piece left you feeling hopeful. Your kindness and encouragement are a gift to any writer, and I sincerely appreciate you taking the time to share such a luminous response. 💛

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